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Taku
Hello, this is Taku from Japan.
I used to be a member of Lang-8 for years.
I hope that I can make a lot of friends here and improve my English skills.
Please feel free to contact me.
Let's learn together!
I used to be a member of Lang-8 for years.
I hope that I can make a lot of friends here and improve my English skills.
Please feel free to contact me.
Let's learn together!
Profile: Taku
Making a Short Story in EnglishWith native lang
I asked ChatGPT5 to give me four sentences consisting of a short story. I'd like wite them in English.
I ran to the station and fortunately caught
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I studied how to use past perfect this morning, but it's really difficult to use fluently. I'd like to write some sentences for practice.
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I worked from home today. Working at home is a good option when I want to concentrate on making proposal documents on my own. I made two docum ...
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Yesterday was the last day of our family's summer trip to Mie prefecture. Our final destination was the Gotemba Sea-swimming Area where people ...
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My family and I got up at 4:00 am. We left the guesthouse where we stayed to watch the sunrise over Meito Iwa. We arrived at 4:30. There were
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Today is the second day of our short trip to Mie prefecture. We visited Meoto Iwa (Wedded Rocks) this morning. I bought a goshuin book and had ...
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My family and I came to Mie prefecture this morning. It took us over 7 hours to drive from Saitama. We visited Ise Jingu, one of the oldest sh ...
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My family and I are going to drive to Mie prefecture to visit Ise-Jingu, one of the oldest shrines in Japan. We will leave home at 1:00 midnigh ...
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I'm heading to the Shimbashi office to have a meeting with the president of my company. Two days ago, I received a phone call from him. He want ...
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When I work from home, I have a special morning routine as part of my daily routine. After eating breakfast, I brew a cup of coffee that I pu ...
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Since I was working from home today, I was able to take a break for practicing the piano. It was a very good way to refresh myself. While I w ...
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I slept well last night. When I woke up, I felt energetic. I refreshed myself by taking a cold shower. After having a light breakfast, I pract ...
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I didn't sleep well last night. I woke up twice in the middle of the nihgt. It was very difficult to go back to sleep after I woke up. I watch ...
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Today, my family and I went to a shopping mall. My wife and daughter wanted to drink bubble milk tea at Gong cha, so I asked them to order for ...
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I woke up at 9:00 am and did some my morning routine, such as strecthing, excercises, and meditation. After that, I changed my clothes and wen ...
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My wife and I went to our son's swimming competition this morning. It was really hot and I got a sunburn on my face and neck. Our son competed ...
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I delivered a presentation to one of our potential clients yesterday. There were over 30 people in the room, including the CEO of the company. ...
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I'm feeling much better than yesterday. I'm heading to Hamamatsu in Shizuoka by bullet train. It takes about one and a half hours to get there ...
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Today, I felt much better when I got up. The medicine that I took worked well. Although it was very hot outside, I decided to bring my jacket
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I wasn't feeling well When I woke up this morning, so I decided not to go to the office today. I went to a clinic, but there was a sign on the ...