A Message I Sent

After:  Yesterday, while I was checking X, I found a post sent to me by Yasunori Era, who is a candidate representing "The Path to Rebirth". He shared his speech on X. He shared the speech that he had delivered on Shinbashi station. I sent a message to him, because I thought that his speech could be improved by modifying several expressions. Here is the link that I sent to him. https://t.co/rl2kcHQzA8 Yesterday, while I was checking X, I found a post that was sent by Yasunori Era, who is one of the candidates of 'The Path to Rebirth'. He shared his speech on X, which he delivered at Shinbashi station. I sent a message to him, because I thought that his speech can be improved by modifying several expressions. Here is the link that I sent to him. https://t.co/rl2kcHQzA8