Writing English Takes a Lot of Time

I write my diary in Korean and English here on Nyan8. Compered to writing a diary in Korean, writing in English takes a lot of time. Korean is easy to understand because many words are made from Chinese characters and the word order is the same with Japanese. If I change the sentences Japanese to English directly, it seems that I don't have enough explanation, and it becomes a long sentence. When I read the corrected sentences, there are words added that I have no idea, so I 'm still getting used to it. But it's a great learning experience, so I will keep on my trying. 

私はこのNyan8で韓国語と英語の日記を書いている。韓国語で日記を書くのに比べ英語で書くのはすごく時間がかかる。韓国語は漢字から作られた単語が多く、語順も同じなのでわかりやすい。日本語をそのまま英語にすると説明が足りないらしく、長い文章になる。添削された文をみると全く思いつかない単語が追加されていてまだまだ慣れない。でもとても勉強になるので無理せず続けよう。